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Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A13610620 - 'Help!' - the Film and Album

Post 1

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Entry: 'Help!' - the Film and Album - A13610620
Author: Jimster (What are YOU writing right now?) - U292

Just to get this out of the way, really, here's an entry on one of the last remaining Beatles not featured in the Edited Guide.

I have to admit I've not read this through properly yet, so a fresh pair of eyes will be much appreciated.


A13610620 - 'Help!' - the Film and Album

Post 2

Rudest Elf


Just a few typos (and no jokes smiley - smiley):

they confirmed their positions as the world's biggest [position]

'I Need You'(Harrison) (Shouldn't there be a space before the 1st bracket?)

girl-friend and future wife Patti Boyd. [Patti Boyd).]

'Ticket to Ride' is a veritably goldmine, [veritable]

(It's Only Love) dismissed it because it its twee lyrics, [of its]

(I've Just Seen a Face) McCartney wrote and song this track, [sang]

(Yesterday - end 2nd para) either stp playing it [stop]

(Footnote 1) 'Scouse' is the name for the accent spoke by [spoken]


A13610620 - 'Help!' - the Film and Album

Post 3

Smij - Formerly Jimster

Thanks for that, RF - your eagle eyes picked up loads there. I think I'll pop this into PR now, actually.

Jims


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Post 4

Rudest Elf


smiley - ok


A13610620 - 'Help!' - the Film and Album

Post 5

Smij - Formerly Jimster

And that entry is now in PR smiley - smiley

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