A Conversation for Whaling and Whale Protection [Peer Review version]

A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 61

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection - for ease of finding the whales


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 62

U168592

No, it stinks smiley - tongueout

Course I am! smiley - laugh


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 63

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Such an entry smiley - ok

I'm just a little conflicted though - since a Certain scout's name is listed as a researcher, then that Certain scout could not recommend this when it is that Certain scout's turn (on wednesday, for example). Ah well, such is life - there is both the bitter and the sweet.

However, if there Was Another scout hanging about just looking for something to pick, why then this would be it. smiley - whistle

smiley - smiley


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 64

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

I had the same problem recently, and there's a way around it. If a certain Scout wanted to recommend this, then could say, whistle, and I could remove their name, so the smiley - magic button would appear. I could then have a word with the sub-editor if the recommendation is picked by the Editors, asking for said Scout to be relisted as co-author.

smiley - bigeyes


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 65

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


That sounds devious to me - but I'm sure that a Certain scout with more convenient scruples wouldn't mind. smiley - bigeyes

smiley - whistle


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 66

Skankyrich [?]

The names of species shouldn't be capitalised, unless they are named after a particular person. For example, 'Bryde's whale' is correct as it was named after a Norweigian whaler, but 'Sperm whale' is incorrect. You'll need to remove the capitals from almost all of the species names, unfortunately.

I'd also prefer not to have my name added to Entries that I haven't contributed significantly to, as you know, so I've removed my name - but thanks for the thought smiley - ok


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 67

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Ok Skankyrichsmiley - okno problem smiley - smiley

I'll go change those nowsmiley - run


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 68

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Did I get them all?smiley - cdouble
I need some fresh eyes to look..


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 69

Skankyrich [?]

Yes, I think you did smiley - ok


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 70

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Tasmiley - smooch


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 71

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Just giving this a final squinty-eyed look:

>>...only three species of great whale still exist in sufficient numbers to be hunted at all: Sei, Fin and Sperm<<
Only remaining instance I found where capitalized names should be lower case.

>>It was highly-prized as the best quality oil for *lamps. Used* in later manufacture of soap, ice cream, cosmetics and margarine; and by-products include glycerin.<<
Should this be '...lamps and was used...'?

>>Whale conservation can be promoted by countries providing tourists with this facility, garnering...<<
I'm not sure what 'this facility' is, but from the text that follows it I'm guessing that you have sanctuaries in mind. Does this convey your meaning: 'Countries can promote Whale conservation by creating sanctuaries and providing tourists with access to them, garnering...'?

Pretty minor stuff, hey? I think this is in great shape. smiley - cheers

Btw, I visited with a Certain Scout - on the QT - and while this Certain Scout thinks that a Certain Idea is wonderfully mischievous - this Certain Scout would love to recommend a Certain Entry based on its own whale-sized merits and will remain as a relatively anonymous squid in the PR pool. smiley - ok


A13524004 - Whaling and Whale Protection

Post 72

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Thanks for the final polishsmiley - birothat's all done nowsmiley - ok

Thanks also for visiting a Certain Scout!
Not that I don't trust whomever the sub-editor will be, I just don't trust my memorysmiley - ermso now the smiley - magicdeed is donesmiley - wizard I think you'll find everything is ship-shape nowsmiley - pirate


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Post 73

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Your Guide Entry has just been picked from Peer Review by one of our Scouts, and is now heading off into the Editorial Process, which ends with publication in the Edited Guide. We've therefore moved this Review Conversation out of Peer Review and to the entry itself.

If you'd like to know what happens now, check out the page on 'What Happens after your Entry has been Recommended?' at EditedGuide-Process. We hope this explains everything.

Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!


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Post 74

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - wow

Thanks!

smiley - wowsmiley - boingsmiley - wow


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Post 75

Traveller in Time Reporting Bugs -o-o- Broken the chain of Pliny -o-o- Hired

Traveller in Time smiley - tit swimming smiley - somersaults
"Congratulations smiley - wow"


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Post 76

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Thank yousmiley - titsmiley - smooch


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Post 77

pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)


Congratulations! smiley - applause

That was fast smiley - doh I mean - who knew? smiley - smiley


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Post 78

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Thank you for all your help pailawaysmiley - smooch


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Post 79

Noth€r

Thar' she blowssmiley - ok
Nothersmiley - planet


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Post 80

BigAl Patron Saint of Left Handers Keeper of the Glowing Pickle and Monobrows

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