h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Woo-hoocongratulations Psycorp!!

I guess this must be considered another major victory for pie boy. Well done, this is a fine entry.

Go on lad. well deserved.

Now if you can get promotion you can start bothering Ormy to put a link from the VSC page to it.

Heh, somehow I don't think that's something to worry about in the forseeable future.

and a tempramental young striker named Alan Smith
Temper-amental

congrats, like Leeds it leads

Hopefully the sub will pick up on that typo...

Hi Psycorp,I've picked up on that typo ( and a few others ), and I've now finished subbing your entry. You can see the result here:
A13488474

Please have a look and tell me if I can return it to the eds

Bel

Looks good, just one bit I picked up on, under the Loftus and Speight heading;

"After defeating Slavia Prague in the quarter finals, Leeds was drawn against the Turkish side Galatasaray"

Should be "Leeds were".

Other than that, thanks a lot!

Ok, I'll go and change that

I should have had a proper look actually, as pointed out in the England in the world cup... thread, football teams generally use plurals, as they're groups of people.

"bitter rival Manchester United ran away with its first title victory in 26 years"

Should be "bitter rivals" and "their first"

"Newcastle United was persuaded to sell an England midfielder"

Were

"followed by a victory over reigning champion Arsenal"

champions

"he agreed terms with Leeds' biggest rival and"

biggest rivals


I know it's a bit late and it's my fault really, I should've had a proper look when you asked me to! Sorry!

Sorry Psycorp, can you post it in the forum ? I've submitted the entry, so can't make the changes
Sorry, I missed those when going through it again

Which forum?

Sub -eds forum, the curators ( editorial) can't do anything yet, because it's not yet edited.

what does anyone else think about blackwell????should he stay or should he go????

Seems to me then man has been keeping Leeds afloat while you guys crwal back from financial meltdown. Wait til Leeds is debt free and then gibe him a chance to do his job properly, that's my view.

I think he's gone by Monday.

leeds lost last night 3-0 i think some of the leeds players have the talent but do not seem to be playing to the best of their ability

Every time I see Healy play for Northern Ireland I wonder why he isn't in the premiership yet, and I guess he will be next season, with our without Leeds. I don't really know many of your other players- is that Steve Stone in your midfield? I like him, he's a really useful player with a lot of experience and a good right foot.