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Writing Workshop: A1308368 - Christopher Columbus - Explorer

Post 1

J

Entry: Christopher Columbus - Explorer - A1308368
Author: Jodan - Better than sliced bread. Certainly better than Verc - U201497

I'm going to try to proofread this this week (which will take a while) but meanwhile, if anyone has some interesting facts, suggestions, etc... feel free to tell me!

smiley - blacksheep


A1308368 - Christopher Columbus - Explorer

Post 2

Z

I'm not a natural proof reader, (sound of laughing at my understandment from the background). But I have to say that this entry is excellent smiley - biggrin I can't think of anything to add, having read one entire book on Christopher Columbus I'm hardly an expert, and that was a pop up book.


A1308368 - Christopher Columbus - Explorer

Post 3

J

smiley - biggrin Thanks Z

I'm working on proofreading this one... the first part is done but I'm not sure my printer can handle the second and third parts!

smiley - blacksheep


A1308368 - Christopher Columbus - Explorer

Post 4

Z

Good idea, I've never printed out any of my own entries to proof read, but now we have a network printer at home (smiley - geek) I should try it, I often find errors when I re read entries.


A1308368 - Christopher Columbus - Explorer

Post 5

J

I can't stand proofreading my own entries any other way!! For some reason, I can't sit down at a computer and read something I just wrote.

I also print out long entries (such as the Lord Byron Series) for proofreading. This one falls into both categories I suppose smiley - erm

smiley - blacksheep


A1308368 - Christopher Columbus - Explorer

Post 6

Spiff


Wow! It's a biggy! smiley - yikes

Opening looks good (got as far as him having the idea of getting to Japan by sailing West); will try to get back to you when i have time to dedicate to the rest.


cya
spiff


A1308368 - Christopher Columbus - Explorer

Post 7

J

Thanks Spiff - it was much more intimidating as one entry though smiley - yikes

smiley - blacksheep


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