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Peer Review: A12962784 - The Heidi Game

Post 1

Rockhound

Entry: The Heidi Game - A12962784
Author: Rockhound - U889233

smiley - disco
An odd little offering smiley - biggrin


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Post 2

Icy North

Hilarious! I love it! smiley - ok


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Post 3

Mu Beta

I enjoyed that. Thank you very much.

B


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Post 4

Bright Blue Shorts

Most excellent. I think you have written an entertaining entry that misses nothing of the story. I know of nothing you can add to it.

BBS smiley - smiley


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Post 5

Rockhound

Cheers IcyNorth, Mu Beta and BBS! smiley - cheers

Tidied up a couple of things, and added the link to the EG entry on Super Bowls.
smiley - disco


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Post 6

David B - Singing Librarian Owl

Very good. smiley - biggrin


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Post 7

Mu Beta

Any constructive criticism left?

B


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Post 8

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

I reckon it's fourth and goal on the one-yard line with William 'Refrigerator' Perry about to run this one in for a touchdown smiley - ok


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Post 9

Mu Beta

smiley - erm Does that mean it's good?

B


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Post 10

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Wasn't the smiley - ok enough of a giveaway? smiley - tongueout


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Post 11

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Post 12

Rockhound

smiley - cheers IcyNorth, Mu Beta, BBS, David B & Sir Gosho

Yay!

smiley - disco


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Post 13

Icy North

Great entry - well done! smiley - ok


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Post 14

Mu Beta

smiley - bubbly

One of the smoother rides through PR I can remember. smiley - winkeye

B


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Post 15

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Just goes to show - write a good entry about an interesting subject, structure it well, use GuideML, good grammar and spell everything right, and everything will run like clockwork with a minimum of fuss.

Well done smiley - cheers


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