A Conversation for Extracting your own Dna. Kitchen Science.

Edited Guide Writing Workshop: A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 1

OldBerk

Entry: Extracting your own Dna - A12857682
Author: OldBerk - U3164926

ready for publishing, I think.


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 2

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

<>

smiley - biroYou can't pour anything fresh from the freezer, because it'd be solid, not liquid. I think you mean "fridge" smiley - huh

smiley - tea

What are you hoping for with this entry? I'm afraid it doesn't meet the <./>writing-guidelines</.> for an edited entry, even though it's certainly interestingsmiley - ok

Thanks
Galaxy Babe
smiley - towel


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 3

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Because of their alcohol content gin and vodka freeze at lower temperatures than most domestic freezers can reach, so you can chill them in a freezer and they'll still be liquid.


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 4

Leo


smiley - laugh no, not quite the guidelines, but it could be made to fit. And why not? It would make a nice addition. smiley - ok

1. it's a drop short. That's not bad, but it will be longer before we're finished with it.

2. it needs an intro. why would you want to extract your dna? is there any other method? Maybe include a list of things you need to collect before you start. What is dna? include a link.

3. it needs explanation of every step. what are you doing? why?

4. conclusion. what now? OK, so I've got my dna... now what?


Do this, and it'll probably be ready for publishing. smiley - biggrin


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 5

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

<>

I didn't know that, I apologise, can you tell I'm a teetotaller?

smiley - sorry


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 6

OldBerk

it's alcohol it will not freeze, try it, I did.smiley - biggrin

Oldberk


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 7

OldBerk

OK so far so good.smiley - ermsmiley - blushThis is one of those things to demonstrate that this, "DNA" "stuff" does existsmiley - cool. It's not intended to use as a means of proving anything other than that.


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 8

OldBerk

OK so I have done some editing, what else do I need to do? Sensible replies only please? Thanks to all who have replied so far.


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 9

Leo


Hmmm... GuideML would spice it up, but if you don't want to, you don't have to.

House Style Guide says use italics instead of capital letters, but again, that's guideML, and the subbie can fix it.

I can't think of much it needs except links (again, guideML and the subbie can do it).

Anyone else?

Of course they'll have lots to say in PR. Anyone think this is ready for PR?


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 10

Not him

Yup. PR please.


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 11

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Is this not an entry for the alternative guide?


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 12

Not him

No Opti. This can go in the EG. You can trust me on this: I'm a scout.Next time you disagree with me, please, just drop me a note. I can explain freely on my PS. smiley - ok


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 13

KB

What's going on with this piece at the minute?


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 14

Wilma Neanderthal

Well, Oldberk is definitely still around. He posted 6 days ago. Let's see if he can hear us..

Hello, Mr Oldberk? Would like to come back now? We've put some balloons up and are ready for PR partying

smiley - biggrin


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 15

Wilma Neanderthal

smiley - sadface

EGWW calling OldBerk?


A12857682 - Extracting your own Dna

Post 16

OldBerk

back now. will post it soon. Thanks to all for advice and help.


Key: Complain about this post