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A1159625 - A Cup of Joe
The Professor Posted Aug 29, 2003
Here's the first problem I see: "as a references to a cup of coffee comes from (not that I care if you do, I will delve into it anyway because I spent all this time finding out).
First: you have "references" when it shouldn't be plural
Second: The guide frowns upon first person in PR...so that bit should be removed
Congrats on your first entry!!
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A1159625 - A Cup of Joe
roundbrackets Posted Aug 29, 2003
> First: you have "references" when it shouldn't be plural
Ah, yes, thank you.
> Second: The guide frowns upon first person in PR...so that bit should be removed
Well, yes I know, you should refrain from writing in first person unless you have a good reason, and after thinking about I I decided to rewrite this part.
A1159625 - A Cup of Joe
Number Six Posted Sep 10, 2003
I like it - all I can point to in the way of improvements are are a few typos: troups > troops, for example, and I think there's a 'to' missing from "(Andy Warhol liked the paint the cans)"
Cheers,
Number Six
A1159625 - A Cup of Joe
Geggs Posted Sep 10, 2003
Nice entry!
One thing though, you only really need to reference the entry on coffee once. You can take out the links around the other times you use the word. No need for overkill.
Geggs
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Sep 11, 2003
I like this etymological stuff. Full marks.
FM
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There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho Posted Sep 23, 2003
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Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman Posted Sep 25, 2003
Well done: I picked this, and it's nice to see short, well-written, informative entries make the grade.
or perhaps I should say 
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Number Six Posted Sep 25, 2003
There's nothing quite like your first guide entry getting accepted... well done!
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roundbrackets Posted Sep 26, 2003
Thank you all for your feedback and help. Wow, I feel unexpectedly happy. =)
It should be a messure of how busy I have been that you knew before I did. Haha. School, work, stuck in coach mesmerized by reality TV...
This along with the coffee brewing the the kitchen will make my Friday.
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- 1: roundbrackets (Aug 29, 2003)
- 2: The Professor (Aug 29, 2003)
- 3: roundbrackets (Aug 29, 2003)
- 4: Number Six (Sep 10, 2003)
- 5: Geggs (Sep 10, 2003)
- 6: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Sep 11, 2003)
- 7: h2g2 auto-messages (Sep 23, 2003)
- 8: There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho (Sep 23, 2003)
- 9: Felonious Monk - h2g2s very own Bogeyman (Sep 25, 2003)
- 10: Number Six (Sep 25, 2003)
- 11: roundbrackets (Sep 26, 2003)
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