h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: How to Play 'Red Letter' - A1136486
Author: Caper Plip - working on a Edited Guide Entry - honest - U180841

Hi all!

It's been a long time since I last put an Entry into here, but thankfully exams have finished and I finally managed to get off my lazy backside to write another!

Any comments?

Caper Plip

Looks good to me One nitpick-

In the variations section, you say "barring middle-names from the game" but you never made it clear that it's their full name. I thought it was just your first name until I read that, so the sentence "If the letter called out was 'e', and the person had 4 'e's in their name" made me wonder what kind of name has four 'e's in it

Like I say though, a well written entry, though I know nothing about the subject

My only comment is you need to make it clear that the letter picker tells everyone else what the red letter is- although it becomes obvious further down that they must do, they is a possiblity of temporary confusion...

Hi there!

Changes made:

- added 'full name' to clarify
- made it clear about the announcement of the red letter

Thanks!

Any more comments?

Caper Plip

Much clearer, Caper

Welcome back to Peer Review CP and another cracking entry Eeeh this has brought back fond memories of childhood...

Can't come up with any suggestions at the moment cos I'm a little tired, so I'll reread it over the weekend to see if I can come up with anything

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