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Alternative Writing Workshop: A1124290 - Canal Fishing my way
manda1111 Started conversation Nov 11, 2003
Entry: Canal Fishing my way - A1124290
Author: *manda*(ACE and Guru)(Minister of Rong Spellings) Visit the H2G2/LDers Advice Corner A1027171 or The H2G2/LDers Space U201567 - U193090
just thought I would like a bit of feed back 
manda 
A1124290 - Canal Fishing my way
LL Waz Posted Nov 13, 2003
Go Mrs. Manda! I do like that ending.
manda, I can't give any feedback, (other than that ), on the content because I haven't a clue about fishing. Maybe someone will come along who has. Are you looking for feedback on the writing? If you are it would help to know if you would like this to go in the Edited Guide. It does seem an entry that's suited for it, but it would mean changes. One change being that of changing it to third person writing.
A1124290 - Canal Fishing my way
manda1111 Posted Nov 20, 2003
I thought I was Subscribed to this Forum 
Thanks for the advise,
I Don't mind changing it, It is just something I wrote and thought I would see what people thought of it 
I don't know if I can put it in the third person though, as there is only 2 of us (Me and Mrs Manda )
manda
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