A Conversation for GG: Irish National Heritage Park, Ferrycarrig, Wexford

Peer Review: A1124281 - Irish National Heritage Park

Post 1

Gnomon - time to move on

Entry: Irish National Heritage Park - A1124281
Author: Gnomon - U151503

An entry about a piece of Irish heritage.


A1124281 - Irish National Heritage Park

Post 2

The Punctuation Police

This is very interesting!

There is one sentence that is not quite right. It has the phrase 'in the hope the monk's prayers'. This ought to have the word 'that' between 'hope' and 'the'. It should also be monks' rather than monk's, unless there was only one monk!


A1124281 - Irish National Heritage Park

Post 3

Gnomon - time to move on

Fixed that!


A1124281 - Irish National Heritage Park

Post 4

Ormondroyd

Nice work, Gnomon! smiley - ok

The only thing I think this needs is a little more explanation of some historical/archeological terms, either in the text or in footnotes. I'd particularly like to know the meanings of 'portal dolmen', 'cist burial' and 'corbelled rood'.


A1124281 - Irish National Heritage Park

Post 5

Gnomon - time to move on

Thanks, Ormondroyd.

I've added footnotes explaining Portal Dolmen, Cist Burial and Corbelled Roof (which I had misprinted as Rood). All these terms are explained in the linked entry on Pre-Celtic Ireland, but there is no harm in explaining them again here.


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Post 6

Ormondroyd

smiley - ok Thanks for that!

The Eds will probably want to include the location of the park in the title, as is generally done with Edited Entries about places, buildings, parks etc. So you could add 'Ferrycarrig, County Wexford, Ireland' to the title and save them a job! smiley - smiley


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Post 7

J

Good one Gnomon smiley - smiley Interesting read

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 8

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Post 9

Number Six

Given recent new knowledge, I find posts 1,2 and 3 very interesting... congratulations Gnomon!

smiley - cheers

smiley - mod


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Post 10

Ormondroyd

Well done, Gnomon! smiley - oksmiley - bubblysmiley - stout


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Post 11

Gnomon - time to move on

Yay!


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