h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Very good!
You could try using some guideML on your paragraph headers to brighten things up a bit, also maybe include a link to a website on the subject of your entry.
Good Luck.
Zarkin' Fardwarks.

Thanks

I hadn't thought of using links to other websites. I shall have to discover how to do that. I'm not the quickest when it comes to computer type stuff.

I like the entry. Would you mind if I direct people to it from my Royal Anthropology Society (A1975179)? Although mostly historical, the reliance on comparative cultural factors for evaluation also puts it quite within the field of Anthropology.
A few comments: you might want to consider moving some of the footnotes (which tend to be quite long) into the main text of the entry. Also, the comment about the origin of the word "Saxon" might work better closer to the beginning of the entry, since they are the focus of the whole document.
I suppose this goes outside the limitations of your entry, but you might consider linking to a page discussing the possibility of the existence of Arthur. And as previously suggested, a little color would liven it up.
-Master of the Dojo

Hello Master of the Dojo,

Thanks for your kind comments.

Feel free to direct people to it I don't mind.

It still needs some working doing to it but at the moment I can't do anything because the computer at home went phut! and until we get a new one (next year in all likelihood) I will be able to polish it up an awful lot.

The linking to an Arthur page is a good idea - one I hadn't thought of. If one exists - I haven't checked. If it doesn't then perhaps when I have time I could write one myself - who knows?



Wulfric