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Peer Review: A1070524 - depressed and chronically ill DO'S and DON'TS
pedboy Started conversation Jun 11, 2003
Entry: depressed and chronically ill DO'S and DON'TS - A1070524
Author: pedboy-(DOS)(RQG)(IGC)(E.A.T.S)(P.U.D.D.I.N.G)minister of smelly Veeblefetzers , (camels) A965810digibox version A105602 - U200417
A work from the heart,but able to be reviewed now.
A1070524 - depressed and chronically ill DO'S and DON'TS
J Posted Jun 11, 2003
Hello pedboy.
This entry might be more suitable for the Alternative Writing Workshop as, in its current state, it doesn't abide by the Writing-Guidelines. You could either remove it or tweak it until it works with the Guidelines. 
It's quite funny though 
A1070524 - depressed and chronically ill DO'S and DON'TS
pedboy Posted Jun 11, 2003
Thank you jordan, I thought it was acceptable for PR. Could you advise me the areas that need tweaking?
pedboy
A1070524 - depressed and chronically ill DO'S and DON'TS
J Posted Jun 11, 2003
There's a number of first person references, 'We all have our...'
Those would have to replaced
I'll be back with more later
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