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Post 1

Almighty Tim

Entry: All in the Family - The Sitcom - A1065214
Author: Almighty Tim - U229208

This is my first attempt at getting into the edited guide, and I wrote the entry on a whim after watching a few episodes one night. I thought that such a groundbreaking show should at least be mentioned here in the guide, but I found that no one had written about it yet. So I did. smiley - smiley

Suggestions and critiques are more than welcome, of course.

-Tim smiley - zen


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Post 2

J

Good start!!

I have two suggestions-

A section for catchphrases 'Stifle' 'Meathead' etc.

A section for memorable moments, such as when Sammy Davis Junior kissed Archie.

Also, I think that there was a spin off of one of the spin offs. I don't remember the name of it so, I'm not sure if you included it.

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 3

Blues Shark - For people who like this sort of thing, then this is just the sort of thing they'll like


The purist in me says that the debt owed by Archie and Co to Johnny Speight's 'Til Death Us Do Part' is so great that the mention of it ought to be at the top of the piece, not the bottom...I don't think 'Loosely based' really covers it either...

Other than that fine. Although vastly watered down from the British original, for ASmerican TV it represented a seismic shift in programming.smiley - ok

smiley - shark


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Post 4

Almighty Tim

I've moved the mention of 'Til Death Do Us Part to the first paragraph, and added a bit about other Norman Lear shows. I'd like to add some more information about the orignal British version, but I just can't find much information regarding it. Any suggestions?


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Post 5

Blues Shark - For people who like this sort of thing, then this is just the sort of thing they'll like


It is quite difficult to find information on (I've been working on a piece about it for about a year now, it's slow progress). As the political correctness bandwagon has rolled round, it has fallen badly out of favour in this country, and the BBC recently admirtted that they had lost a lot of the tapes of the early episodes. smiley - sadface

smiley - shark


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Post 6

Friar

Is this seriously your first effort into the EG?

It's outstanding!

OF course, you could add piles and piles of material, but the only thing I would suggest is to mention that the show almost didn't get on the air. The network was afraid of the public backlash. From the very beginning Lear's creative team, the cast (esp. Reiner and O'Connor) and the network clashed regularly. This was the reason put forth for the show's short run (for a show of its success).

Even without this, I think this will get to the front page. Good Work!

Friar


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Post 7

J

They also thought that this was the funniest show that was ever made, which is why the made it to CBS, despite raunchy content. smiley - ok It had one of the longest laughs in TV History and was considered the funniest half hour of television that ever made it to air

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 8

Zarquon's Singing Fish!

Although I've never seen the series, this seems a good entry to me too! smiley - ok

smiley - fishsmiley - musicalnote


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Post 9

J

You've never seen All in the Family?!

*mumbles incoherently about the British*

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 10

Blues Shark - For people who like this sort of thing, then this is just the sort of thing they'll like


Not to put too fine a point on it, importing All in the Family would have been a bit like sending coals to Newcastle (or in US terms, oil to Texas).

We had the original.

smiley - shark


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Post 11

J

You also had Steptoe and Son, the basis of another classic sitcom, Sanford and Son, which I won't get into.

*hums catchy theme to Sanford and Son*

smiley - blacksheep Bup ah dah dah! bup ah dahdahdah duh dah!


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Post 12

Almighty Tim

I've fixed a couple of typos I found and clarified a few points. I also want to add something in Archie's section regarding "Get outta my chair," but I can't figure out where to plug it in or even if it's worth mentioning. Suggestions?


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Post 13

J

You could make a new paragraph or section about archie's chair, it doesn't have to be blended in, it can just be it's own section

If you want

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 14

Sam

Almighty Tim,

Are you happy for me to stick this in the Edited Guide now? smiley - smiley


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Post 15

Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

Ahem, wouldn'y it be nice to say "the controversial BBC sitcom 'Till Death Do Us Part by Johnny Speight", give the guy credit where it's due? I mea, wouldn't hurt, would it?

smiley - ale


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Post 16

Almighty Tim

KerrAvon, I'll do that right now. Thanks for the suggestion. Other than that, Sam, I'm ready when you are. smiley - biggrin


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

smiley - ok That's great.

smiley - ale


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Blues Shark - For people who like this sort of thing, then this is just the sort of thing they'll like


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Kerr_Avon - hunting stray apostrophes and gutting poorly parsed sentences

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