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Entry: New Years Eve Celebrations in Southcentral Pennsylvania, USA - A1045838
Author: Jimi X - U53353

I'm cheating a bit and re-writing an entry I did for The Post for inclusion into the Edited Guide...

I still need to put in some links, but I reckon the text is in fairly good shape.

Let me know if it needs anything.


- Jimi X

How did I know who this was by?

Great entry! Cheater.

I was feeling a bit lazy at the time and thought 'why not?'

Links added.

Hi, Jimi!

Another really interesting and readable entry!

My only concern is that the title is a bit bland - I don't think it's eyecatching enough.

What about:
'Drop something big on New Year's Eve - a Pennsylvania tradition'?

I think that might attract more readers...


typo alert (hell being a sub-ed, isn't it?)
There's a missing space in the footnote


Azara

Thanks!

See what happens when I create a footnote solely to link to another entry?

That'll teach me.


- X

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Thanks for contributing to the Edited Guide!

Looks like I need to get back to work then eh?

I don't think I'll copy this one as FC would kill me for stealing Hogmanay from her.

for Jimi X!

Azara