A Conversation for Kurt Donald Cobain

Writing Workshop: A1038340 - Kurt Donald Cobain

Post 1

Kleopatra

Entry: Kurt Donald Cobain - A1038340
Author: Kleopatra, Queen of the Red Cedar - U226746

Kurt Cobain is one of the country's greatest musicians.


A1038340 - Kurt Donald Cobain

Post 2

Cyzaki

Urm... isn't he dead?

And if you want this to be in the Edited Guide (which you don't have to, it's up to you!) then I think it needs a lot more detail.

smiley - panda


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Post 3

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Hello Kleopatra, welcome to Peer Review.

Your entry as it currently stands doesn't meet one or more of the guidelines necessary for entries submitted to this forum for review and hopefully for editing. Have you read the Writing-Guidelines yet? That page will give you plenty of information to help you write great entries for the Edited Guide. We don't yet have an entry in the Edited Guide about Kurt Cobain although there is one about Nirvana A337015

You can create new entries any time you please, and about any subject you please, but not all of them have to be peer-reviewed - only the ones you want to be edited. To get a feel for what an edited entry should look like, check out the Nirvana entry, and also the <./>FrontPage</.> each day - five new edited entries are listed there every working day.

smiley - geeksmiley - online2longsmiley - stiffdrinksmiley - hangoversmiley - ok


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Post 4

Kleopatra

well.. even if he is dead, he's still one of the best... (or one of the best there was) and i don't think i asked for this to be submitted... o well..


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Post 5

Cyzaki

I know he's thought of as one of the best there was, but you've written about him as if he was still alive.

I think you could polish this up enough for the Edited Guide, if that's where you want it to go, but it doesn't have to of course!

smiley - panda


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Post 6

Kate

Heya hun.

Um...it kinda looks like you just got bored and there should be about 10 times as much again.
It's a great idea to have a condensed Kurt biography on here, but it needs more detail.


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Post 7

Cyzaki

The author has elvised - flea market?

smiley - panda


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Post 8

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

Lets smiley - ok


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Post 9

Kleopatra

Hey! That wasn't cool! I'm back now..

....

although.....

it seems like it doesn't matter because I've pretty much had it with Cobain anyway...

I really didn't care to have my entry involved... it was just an obsession of mine for a while....


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Post 10

Opticalillusion- media mynx life would be boring without hiccups

Just popping by to say that I've read this and have started a new Entry on him here A43862844


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