h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Entry: Peckham LIbrary - A1032139
Author: Researcher 225923 - U225923

A loosely architecture-based article on Peckham Library, London

Good article!

I haven't seen this in the flesh, but you bring it to life well.

Sprout

Well I have seen it in the flesh - this is a great description

The library is definitely something mouldy old Peckham can be proud of.

I see you are relatively new to the guide pointbeing - welcome! This is a really good entry, but it would be nice if it was divided up a little into sections with subheadings - it just makes it easier on the eye. Maybe a section on the look of the building, its green credentials, and a conclusion would be enough. The content is fine though.

You may not have had time to have a look at the GuideML Clinic yet - it will show you how to put in subheaders etc relatively easily.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/GuideML-Clinic

You might be lucky and get a friendly sub-ed prepared to do it for you this time but it would be a good idea to have a go with the GuideML if you are planning on producing any more entries though - I hope you are.


k

thanks ever so much for the feedback guys - in fact the moment i posted it, it struck me that it probably needed some sort of delineation...kind of looks like just a big lump of text at the moment!

I'll have a think about the structuring - the GuideML shouldn't be too much of a problem if it's anything like HTML

cheers
simon/pointbeing

ok...a few minor changes made, along with a handful of subheadings...feedback most appreciated

I would lose the first heading as it's a bit big and blocky (just start with your introductory para)

Otherwise it's good to go I suspect - you just have to wait a little while for a scout to pick it.

Sprout

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Well Done

crikey!

that was quick...blimey...thankyou everyone!

I have a couple of ideas in the pipeline, i guess i'd better get a move on with them

Hi pointbeing!

I'd like to use your article as a link in the Hootoo Home Of Today column A1008550 I write for <./>thepost</.> if that's OK.

Since it's now gone into the guide, can I have a link please?



Terri.

why I'd be delighted that's a fascinating column you have there

the link they sent me this very morn was:

http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/A1043164

cheers, all the best
pb

I didn't pick this up till after i'd sent my column off (computer probs yet again, so put the old link in; you were also on the front page, so you may have been busy!

Well done, great entry!

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Terri.

I didn't pick this up till after i'd sent my column off (computer probs yet again), so put the old link in; you were also on the front page, so you may have been busy!

Well done, great entry!

Glad you've looked at H.O.T; we are looking for feedback at ; so please do leave a to show you've passed by!



Terri.