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Post 1

Whisky

Entry: Afonso de Portago - A1026541
Author: Whisky :- Consultant retro-phrenologist - U180644

Ok folks, do your worst... I've dug up about as much information as I could possibly find on this guy, but if anyone can add anything, just scream...

As usual, please feel free to rip this to pieces, I'm never happy with my writing style - so if you can do better - tell me!

smiley - cheers
Whisky


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Post 2

J

Did you recycle this A number from your entry on temperature scales smiley - biggrin

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 3

Whisky

smiley - whistle Just trying to do my bit for the environment smiley - winkeye


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Post 4

J

smiley - laugh

Then that would make the Flea Market the recycling center and the Writing Workshop the compost heap? smiley - winkeye

But I'll go read the entry now

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 5

J

I don't know anything about the subject, but I did spot a typo-

As befits -> As benefits

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 6

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

By the time I post this, Jodan may well have covered some or all of these points smiley - smiley

A*l*fonso (but I'm sure you know that by now smiley - winkeye)

"easily accepted the lifestyle of a typical European playboy."
How about (for the benefit of those who don't know what it means) a few examples of the kind of things that lifestyle might include, like travelling, gambling, huntinshootinfishin.

I think 'Motorracing' should be two words, or at least hyphenated.

Some h2g2 entries you might want to link to:

A882902 Spanish Civil War
A139493 Spain
A262306 Cheltenham
A906572 An Introduction to Formula One
A297083 France
A297100 Italy

smiley - smiley


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Post 7

There is only one thing worse than being Gosho, and that is not being Gosho

I think 'befits' is right in that context Jodan - if something is 'befitting', it means that it's apposite or appropriate smiley - smiley


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Post 8

J

Nope smiley - smiley

Like I said, (or did I forget to?) I don't know this subject.

Though I could have caught the links...

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 9

Rho

Hi Whisky smiley - smiley

I'd suggest pasting the contents of this entry into a new entry, then submitting that one to PR. I'm almost certain that I read somewhere that it isn't possible to pick an entry in PR that had already been through PR and picked, even if its contents had been changed. smiley - ok

RhoMuNuQ


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Post 10

J

Quite an incentive to help the enviroment smiley - cross

smiley - blacksheep


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Post 11

Pimms

Is it Afonso or Alfonso (or both)?

Not a very complicated lineage (parents from two countries, born in a third), though I was left trying to guess where the bits of his name derived from - assuming Leighton came from the maternal side, but was it her maiden name or dead husband's?

The second mention of Buenos Aires needs an 'o'ectomy: not Bueonos

Definitely needs links to Formula one entries.

Pimms smiley - mistletoe


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Post 12

Whisky

Think I'll play around with this one over the weekend - as I said, I'm not totally happy with the style now I've had the chance to stand back and look at it... smiley - ok


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Post 13

Whisky

smiley - blush And as I haven't got round to doing anything with this one in the last three weeks I'm pulling it out of PR for the time being... I'll put it back when I've had the chance to play with it smiley - ok


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