A Conversation for The Funk Brothers - The Motown Backing Band

A10195355 - The Funk Brothers - Motown Band

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

A10195355 - The Funk Brothers - Motown Band

Thanks!smiley - blush
No worries STsmiley - ok

Don't you just love how their favourite hangout was a local Undertakers!

They sounded like a right motley crew, and a great band of brothers.smiley - laugh


A10195355 - The Funk Brothers - Motown Band

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BMT

Puts a whole new meaning on taking your music dead seriously does'nt it!smiley - whistle


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - laugh

Did you enjoy reading this entry, ST? It was originally part of the humungous Motown entry which got chopped while it was in PR.
That's been subbed and edited and been on the FP now.smiley - biggrin


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Changing the title slightly smiley - smiley


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clzoomer- a bit woobly

Maybe *THE Motown Backing Band*?

smiley - cheers


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pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)

But now you have 'Motown Backing Band' in the title and 'Motown In-House Band' in the first header. It's the repetition of 'Motown' so close together that looks funny to me. I like the new title (also with the addition of 'THE'). How about 'Fire and Soul' as the header? Or, you know, something or another. smiley - biggrin


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

It will be shortened during editing (if it's picked) to the shortest-possible title, I've only extended the title to attract a passing Scout.

I'll change that first Header *and* the title smiley - ok

Thankssmiley - biggrin


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pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)

I certainly hope it does get picked. smiley - ok Btw, I notice at the bottom

'James Jamerson *Apprecation* Society'

Should be *Appreciation*?

I haven't found anything else amiss, (although I are not as good for the english grammers, (nor speling nether)). smiley - biggrin


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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - laugh
Thanks, typo attended tosmiley - ok


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clzoomer- a bit woobly

smiley - oksmiley - magicsmiley - bubblysmiley - cakesmiley - biggrin


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Woo-hoo!smiley - bubbly


Congratulations - Your Entry has been Picked for the Edited Guide!

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pailaway - (an utterly gratuitous link in the evolutionary chain)

Whee! smiley - somersault (wobbles plastic sheet to great effect!) smiley - cheers


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