A Conversation for Animal Crossing on the GameCube

Peer Review: A1016407 - Animal Crossing on the GameCube

Post 1

Monkey_Marauder

Entry: Animal Crossing on the GameCube - A1016407
Author: Monkey_Marauder - U224236

Tell me if thsi makes you want to buy this incredible game.


A1016407 - Animal Crossing on the GameCube

Post 2

Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Hi there, Monkey Marauder!

I have often thought Animal Crossing looked like an interesting game, but I have yet to save up enough cash for a GameCube, and am having to make due with my N64 for the time being.

But about your entry.... Have you taken a look at some of the entries that are in the Edited Guide on video games? They might give you an idea of the level of content and writing style that people are looking for in Peer Review. Here are a couple you might take a look at:

A692769 -- Donkey Kong
A264863 -- Pokemon

Right now, this entry seems a little bit more like an ad for the game than an article *about* the game, and I'd really like to see it become more of the latter.

Welcome to Peer Review!

smiley - cheers
Mikey


A1016407 - Animal Crossing on the GameCube

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Mikey the Humming Mouse - A3938628 Learn More About the Edited Guide!

Well, the author appears to have disappeared. Anyone want to second a move to the FM?

smiley - mouse


A1016407 - Animal Crossing on the GameCube

Post 4

Monsignore Pizzafunghi Bosselese

yes Mikey, at your service!


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