A Conversation for The h2g2 Poem
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Ameuc Started conversation Jul 30, 2003
Ist stanza: I would change the last line to:-
Around the bath and the sink.
And sadly I would say every verse needs revision.
Although I liked it a lot, I would re-write because it grates instead of flows, as the above suggestion reflects, although the basic message remains intact, it’s like piece work – a bit at a time.
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