A Conversation for The P.U.D.D.I.N.G. Anthem
Researcher 185550 Started conversation Mar 24, 2003
I like it all so far, but might I suggest a change to "don't cheer up, be grumpy"? It feels like "cheer up" is the wrong length (I know it's not) and it does seem to express the view that you could, if you wished, cheer up, whereas the situation you are in leaves you with no choice but to be grumpy. "Don't hide it, be grumpy" perhaps?
Ormondroyd Posted Mar 25, 2003
Researcher 185550 Posted Mar 25, 2003
It's growing on me. It jarred a little when I first read it. I suppose jarring is slightly on the agenda- nothing annoys some people more than a rhyme that doesn't quite go.
Ormondroyd Posted Mar 26, 2003
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