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Tamrhind Started conversation Oct 19, 2004
Hi Adelaide
Just read your article and think it's good historically and factually.
I would suggest, however, increasing the font size and/or changing the font and doing some further paragraphing, just to make it easier for old fogies like me (the old song "My eyes are dim, I cannot see..."). Maybe hunt around the Picture Library for a graphic or two.
I'm also pretty sure that Guide ML has got tags for making lists.
How's that sound? 
Best of Newzild 
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DA ; Simply Vicky: Don't get pithy with me! Posted Oct 20, 2004
I'll get my son onto the Guide ML and graphics, he's good at that kind of thing... Thanks for the remarks!
About the font, you have a point - my eyes aren't so good either, sigh...
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