A Conversation for Internal Poker Vibrators
Xanatic Started conversation Dec 30, 2002
You don't think you could start this entry be explaining what you are talking about. As someone who doesn't go around mixing cement in my sparetime, I had no idea what this entry referred to. Only when I read a footnote did I find out what you were talking about.
Trout Montague Posted Dec 30, 2002
Would you have read it at all if it was entitled "The Placement and Compaction of Fresh Concrete"?
lisawolf (Transgender Forum - A2095643, The New Wiccan Forum - A2106073 ) Posted Dec 31, 2002
I think the title should have been left as it is. It's a good 'draw'. But the first paragraph should have explained what this is all about. It's a well done article, but it needs a better intro, it's just too confusing otherwise.
Cupid Stunt Posted Dec 31, 2002
Never mind that, you can get big ones that do the work of two men!
lostmonalisa Posted Apr 22, 2009
i have to agree. i like the controversial titling, but you should have followed it up in the first paragraph or two with an explanation of what you were talking about.
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