A Conversation for Rules to Help you Find your Remote Control

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Post 1

Whoami - iD dislikes punctuation

Hi!

"If, however, it is your partner there are far more significant questions to be asked before you begin the search:"

might make more sense as:

"If, however, it is your partner who has hidden the remote control, there are far more significant questions to be asked before you begin the search:"

It'd be a bit clearer that way. smiley - wizard

smiley - pumpkinsmiley - cake


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Post 2

Demon Drawer

I think the impact of the original may have been lost in subbing.


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Post 3

Whoami - iD dislikes punctuation

Are you picking? smiley - grrsmiley - winkeye

Whoami? smiley - cake
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Post 4

World Service Memoryshare team

I've changed it. Hope that's okay smiley - winkeye


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Post 5

Whoami - iD dislikes punctuation

Thanks, Anna! I should have spotted that before now, really. smiley - biggrinsmiley - cake


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