A Conversation for Lebanon - Jewel of the Middle East?

Some cavills

Post 1

Edward the Bonobo - Gone.

Basically a good article. Thanks.

But can I be a little rude and pick you up on a couple of things:

First - you've spotted that you missed the link to the Druze entry: A3694809. More significantly, though, that article rightly casts some doubt as to whether they should be included as an islamic sect.

Second - Most style guides (eg http://www.bbctraining.com/pdfs/newsstyleguide.pdf) now rightly counsel against the use of 'schizophrenic' to mean 'multi-faceted' or 'confused'. Schizophrenia has s specific meaning as a horrible, horrible illness.


Some cavills

Post 2

Wilma Neanderthal

Hi Edward,
Thanks for your comments smiley - ta
Unfortunately, this is out of my hands now as it is in the EG and not my "property" any more - I don't have access to edit it. You need to pose these points in editorial feedback (I think...)
It is true the Druze are not a mainstream Muslim sect but they evolved their philosophy from Islam and this is why they are classified as an Islamic sect in Lebanon. Very possibly an erroneous classification, I'll grant you that...
Thanks for reading it, by the way!
smiley - cheers
Wilma


Some cavills

Post 3

Wilma Neanderthal

... and your point about schizophrenia is very well taken. I apologise, and promise not to use the term again out of context.
smiley - sadface
Wilma


Some cavills

Post 4

Edward the Bonobo - Gone.

A gracious apology. I mean to educate, not chastise.


Some cavills

Post 5

Wilma Neanderthal

Thank you, Edward.
Wilma


Query

Post 6

RFJS__ - trying to write an unreadable book, finding proofreading tricky

Where it says...

'Carlos Ghosn, CEO of Nissan, businessman of the year 2000, known as 'the cost-killer'. The first non-Japanese person to ever be at the head of a Japanese society.'

...is this intended to say 'society' instead of, say, 'company'?

Fascinating Entry, by the way.smiley - ok


Query

Post 7

Wilma Neanderthal

Thanks RFJS! Society is how I saw it described in several places. I think it is to do with the Japanese business philosophy of worker participation.... or I may have picked up a french translation of the word "societes" meaning corporation.... I'll have to look into that.
smiley - ta
W


Query

Post 8

Wilma Neanderthal

Edward, I have had that sentence removed. thank you for pointing it out.
smiley - cheerup
W


Key: Complain about this post

Write an Entry

"The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a wholly remarkable book. It has been compiled and recompiled many times and under many different editorships. It contains contributions from countless numbers of travellers and researchers."

Write an entry
Read more