A Conversation for Sedgwick Geological Trail

sentence structure

Post 1

shagbark

dear sub editor:
I was just looking over the piece here and the phrase
"even now where these plates met..."strikes me as awkward.
I remember this came out of peer review somewherebut maybe it would read better without the first two words.
As to whether this really is a failed plate boundary, I still believe that this is the best explanation for the existance of mountains there. Hope you finish your edit sometime this fallsmiley - silly.
Seriously though it does seem like this thing has been in the works a long time.


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