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When the Update gets applied, this will overwrite the original Entry - and therefore the first Editor will replace Devonseaglass. You will go back to being a co-author dsg


Please could you add full stops to all your footnotes? and then I think it looks set to go.

Entry: The Benefits of Pistachios - A65726193
Author: Devonseaglass-dsg - U13965605



I always forget to look at the numbers of the postings. . .

Too few fullstops now corrected.

okey dokey.


just a teeny bit more nitpicking here

green.

Can you see that full stop? It should be the other side of the

likewise with the link on the word grapes - you have the link including the comma there.

The shell protects the oil-rich (around 50% oil) fruit, which is [also] encased in a brown or mauve seed coat, [which] has natural antioxidant properties.


-----> The shell protects the oil-rich (around 50% oil) fruit, which is encased in a brown or mauve seed coat, and has natural antioxidant properties.

remove the unnecessary [also] and replace the second use of the word [which] with 'and'

Then I think it is hunky dory!

Thank you for the masterclass on Guide ML punctuation. Done and dusted.

Editorial Note: This conversation has been moved from 'UPDATE: Pistachios' to 'Pistachios'.