A Conversation for Amfitryon Cafe and Bar, Oslo, Norway

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Fragilis - h2g2 Cured My Tabular Obsession

This entry included several run-on sentences, pronoun confusion, and some mildly odd punctuation. Rather than go into a tedious post on grammar, I've posted my suggested resolution below.

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Amfitryon is about two kilometres west of Oslo's centre. It's not in the buzzing part of Oslo, but is surrounded by residential houses and offices. It's probably one of the best cafés in the city. It's cheap; a meal is about 80 NoK (about 10 US$), which is not bad for Oslo. The food is also very good, as the chefs spend time making the side salad with olives and superb dressing. The café also serves beer.

Amfitryon has an eclectic music collection at just the right volume, and the staff are friendly.

The menu is a little limited. But what the chefs do, they do well. The café is open from 7am to midnight during the week, and from 11am [to midnight?] on Sundays.

In some ways Amfitryon has a split personality between its breakfast café and its night-time bar with hip music. Nevertheless, it makes this transition so smoothly that you feel at home whatever time you visit.


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Cheezdanish, Slacker Princess

Wow. Somebody who's as anal as I am when it comes to literacy on the net. I love it!


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