h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

okay here goes.... this is just a start to test the waters to see if i am helping or not

>>This was filled by a series of migrations often violent by three warlike and militarily superior tribes.<<
This was filled by a series of migrations, often violent, by three warlike and militarily superior tribes.

>>It is said that Joseph of Arimathea brought Christianity to Britain, he visited Glastonbury in AD 63.<<
It is said that Joseph of Arimathea brought Christianity to Britain; he visited Glastonbury in AD 63.

>>The first Christian missionaries were travelling monks and they took advantage of the growth of wealth within the communities, together with the influence of the newly converted Saxon upper class and the habit of burying of Viking nobles with stone grave markers on church grounds tended to cause the conversion to Christianity.<<

The first Christian missionaries were travelling monks. They took advantage of the growth of wealth within the communities, together with the influence of the newly converted Saxon upper class. The habit of burying of Viking nobles with stone grave markers on church grounds also tended to cause the conversion to Christianity.


>>By AD 600, Britain was mostly a collection of Christian kingdoms Anglo-Saxonand Celtic, the last Pagan kingdom was to be the Isle of Wight.<<

By AD 600, Britain was mostly a collection of Christian kingdoms: Anglo-Saxon and Celtic. The last Pagan kingdom was to be the Isle of Wight.

By AD 600, Britain was mostly a collection of Christian kingdoms, Anglo-Saxon and Celtic. The last Pagan kingdom was to be the Isle of Wight.

(i just am not sure what you mean here... Anglo-Saxon and Celtic Christian kingdoms... or... Christian kingdoms: either Anglo-Saxon or Celtic... or... Christian kingdoms, both Anglo-Saxon and Celtic,)

>The first Christian missionaries were travelling monks and they took advantage of the growth of wealth within the communities, together with the influence of the newly converted Saxon upper class and the habit of burying of Viking nobles with stone grave markers on church grounds tended to cause the conversion to Christianity.<<

The first Christian missionaries were travelling monks. They took advantage of the growth of wealth within the communities. This, together with the influence of the newly converted Saxon upper-class and the habit of burying of Viking nobles with stone grave markers on church grounds, tended to cause the conversion to Christianity.

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