This is a Journal entry by AlexK the Twelve of Motion
June 19, 2004
AlexK the Twelve of Motion Started conversation Jun 21, 2004
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(June 19, 2004)
A beautiful day:
green grass and friendly sun.
I don’t give a (crap).
Accidents happen
but you can’t let that stop you.
I live without fear.
First poop in three days.
An abdominal workout
and a clogged toilet.
Try to sneak upstairs
careful not to wake Bruno.
All of my joints crack.
Later and later
each night my bedtime inches
later and later.
June 19, 2004
Mallory Posted Jun 23, 2004
I think I would have used a different word than "inches". maybe... withdraws... recedes... migrates? I'm not quite sure what would work better, you're the poet here, not me.
why is crap in parentheses?
I like them all... the first one's my favorite I think, because it's the least continuous... or, the lines are each their own phrase... you know?
the poop one's gross. It's like one time when there was a brick of poop in the toilet at the theater. Dar or someone had to scoop it out. SO not cool, not to mention really unnatural. Maybe you should poop more often.
love Mal
June 19, 2004
AlexK the Twelve of Motion Posted Jun 23, 2004
Crap is the edited version, since this site doesn't like me to say what the word acrually is. But I am sure you can figure it out.
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