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fundamentallyflawed Posted Nov 7, 2005
Nice touch putting the typo in the smiley!
The story that I'm writing is now at 789 words and I have no idea what it's about so it's not going to turn out as short as I wanted it to be.
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jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada) Posted Nov 7, 2005
I kind of thought so just after I askred!
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fundamentallyflawed Posted Nov 7, 2005
I'm stuck now. I don't feel like writing anymore. I think I'll just save it and go back to it another time. (Considering how I usually do things I probably won't go back to it.)
I've just decided that you want to read the first three pararaphs
It was an unusually cold and windy night and the sun had just set. An eerie darkness fell over the park that seemed to suggest ghosts behind every tree. Perhaps it was the fog? Or perhaps it was the way the moon hung in the sky without regard for human emotion. She felt disposable and shuddered. There was no time left to investigate the weight of this suggestion, she had to get back to the barn. Her own ghosts would confront her soon enough.
The sound of her feet thudding on the grass provided a nice sort of relief from her usually overbearing inner dialogue. She reached the stone path and her footsteps began to echo. Or was that something following her?
She quickened her pace and clutched the package harder to her chest and pulled her coat around it to protect it from the moisture in the air. The rest of her life depended on its contents.
There's about a page and a half more after that but I'm bored with it now. Some dialogue starts right after that though.
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jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada) Posted Nov 7, 2005
Ok, I honestly think that's pretty good...you're goin' places if you keep that up! High five!*smack*
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fundamentallyflawed Posted Nov 7, 2005
Honestly? I just wrote them on the fly... And I have NO IDEA what's in that
ing package
I used to never *ever* show anyone anything that I wrote because the response I used to get from "friends" and what not was usually "That's so creepy/depressing/scary" They're just a bunch of babies though
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jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada) Posted Nov 7, 2005
Well thanks for letting me read it then. I really did like it, you write well. You'll figure something out....her life depends on it, huh? Let me think...
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jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada) Posted Nov 7, 2005
Papers of some sort, declaring...?
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fundamentallyflawed Posted Nov 7, 2005
I will eventually! (Unless I abandon it.) Maybe I can find an old abandoned story and combine them
If I ever finish it I'll let you know.
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jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada) Posted Nov 7, 2005
Ok...sounds like a deal!
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fundamentallyflawed Posted Nov 7, 2005
On a more serious note... What has been going on here?!? I know there was some bickering and what not before but now people are actually leaving over it? Do you know anything about it?
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jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada) Posted Nov 7, 2005
No not [email protected] think people are upset that things've changed -*shrugs* but life goes on. I mean some change is inevitable!
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fundamentallyflawed Posted Nov 7, 2005
Ya. I knew people were upset and fighting but I didn't know it was *that* bad. And I haven't really been on a lot lately so I missed all the "excitement". It makes me a little nervous talking to certain people though...
Ah well, c'est la vie!
The only thing to do is eat more
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fundamentallyflawed Posted Nov 7, 2005
I thought so!
I've just realized that it's nearly 2am here I'm probably going to sign off in a little while... that's the plan at least. We'll see if it works
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