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Post 161

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

No, yoouy're rtifght asbnout tyhat!smiley - winkeye


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Post 162

fundamentallyflawed

smiley - laughNice touch putting the typo in the smiley!

The story that I'm writing is now at 789 words and I have no idea what it's about so it's not going to turn out as short as I wanted it to be.


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Post 163

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

Hmm, so how many more words, approximately? (And thanks! smiley - winkeye)


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Post 164

fundamentallyflawed

smiley - erm... 789 words... exactly...

smiley - smiley


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Post 165

fundamentallyflawed

Or do you mean how many is it going to be?

If so, I have no idea.smiley - laugh


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Post 166

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

Ah ok...exactly!smiley - winkeye


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Post 167

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

I kind of thought so just after I askred!


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Post 168

fundamentallyflawed

I'm stuck now. I don't feel like writing anymore. I think I'll just save it and go back to it another time. (Considering how I usually do things I probably won't go back to it.)

I've just decided that you want to read the first three pararaphssmiley - winkeyesmiley - laugh



It was an unusually cold and windy night and the sun had just set. An eerie darkness fell over the park that seemed to suggest ghosts behind every tree. Perhaps it was the fog? Or perhaps it was the way the moon hung in the sky without regard for human emotion. She felt disposable and shuddered. There was no time left to investigate the weight of this suggestion, she had to get back to the barn. Her own ghosts would confront her soon enough.

The sound of her feet thudding on the grass provided a nice sort of relief from her usually overbearing inner dialogue. She reached the stone path and her footsteps began to echo. Or was that something following her?

She quickened her pace and clutched the package harder to her chest and pulled her coat around it to protect it from the moisture in the air. The rest of her life depended on its contents.



There's about a page and a half more after that but I'm bored with it now.smiley - weird Some dialogue starts right after that though.


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Post 169

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

Ok, I honestly think that's pretty good...you're goin' places if you keep that up! High five!*smack* smiley - winkeye


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Post 170

fundamentallyflawed

smiley - blushHonestly? I just wrote them on the fly... And I have NO IDEA what's in that smiley - bleeping packagesmiley - rofl

I used to never *ever* show anyone anything that I wrote because the response I used to get from "friends" and what not was usually "That's so creepy/depressing/scary" They're just a bunch of babies thoughsmiley - laugh


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Post 171

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

Well thanks for letting me read it then.smiley - smiley I really did like it, you write well. You'll figure something out....her life depends on it, huh? Let me think...


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Post 172

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

Papers of some sort, declaring...?


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Post 173

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

Well you'll think of something!smiley - winkeye


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Post 174

fundamentallyflawed

smiley - laughI will eventually! (Unless I abandon it.) Maybe I can find an old abandoned story and combine themsmiley - weird

If I ever finish it I'll let you know.


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Post 175

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

Ok...sounds like a deal!


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Post 176

fundamentallyflawed

On a more serious note... What has been going on here?!? I know there was some bickering and what not before but now people are actually leaving over it? Do you know anything about it?


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Post 177

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

No not [email protected] think people are upset that things've changed -*shrugs* but life goes on. I mean some change is inevitable!


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Post 178

fundamentallyflawed

Ya. I knew people were upset and fighting but I didn't know it was *that* bad. And I haven't really been on a lot lately so I missed all the "excitement". It makes me a little nervous talking to certain people though...smiley - erm

Ah well, c'est la vie!

The only thing to do is eat more smiley - choc


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Post 179

jaz'd(ace & yada yada *sigh* chocolate yada)

smiley - okExcellent plan!


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Post 180

fundamentallyflawed

smiley - droolI thought so!

I've just realized that it's nearly 2am heresmiley - online2long I'm probably going to sign off in a little while... that's the plan at least. We'll see if it workssmiley - laugh


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