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This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Started conversation May 11, 2006
This is my son's poem... it's been selected to be published in a book of youth poetry. I'm pretty proud of him... (his formatting is centered so it looks prettier 
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Shh...
Shh...
Can you hear the trees?
Whispering and swaying in the wind.
Hear the fish,
gently swimming through the stream.
Hear the birds,
whistling their sweet tune.
Can you hear the salmon,
jumping up the waterfalls?
Hear the robin
flying from perch to perch.
Hear the crickets
getting ready for night to conquer day.
Shh...
Can you hear the silent trees?
Hear the fish
swimming to find shelter for the night.
Hear the birds
tucking in their young.
Hear all the little woodland creatures
scurrying back to their homes.
This is my son's poem - it is being published
Bedwilldo Posted May 11, 2006
That's really good
Specially for someone who lives in a dessert
This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Posted May 11, 2006
He's got a good imagination.
This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Posted May 11, 2006
Pretty smart of you to pick up on that....
This is my son's poem - it is being published
Bedwilldo Posted May 11, 2006
I'd be dumb not to notice
In that case it's surprising that I did
This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Posted May 11, 2006
Well, I think I'm largely impressed that you remembered I live in the desert.
This is my son's poem - it is being published
Bedwilldo Posted May 11, 2006
Now how could I forget the least little detail about you?
After all the experiences we've shared!
This is my son's poem - it is being published
Dea.. - call me Mrs B! Posted May 11, 2006
Teri, I'm seriously impressed!! Nathanial is only 10, isn't he? (I'm assuming Hunter didn't write it)
I really like the poem. I'm mostly impressed that a normal, boisterous, skateboarding kid can actually sit long enough to hear those things and remember them enough to write quite eloquently and beautifully about them.
I'd give him 
but he's a bit young, so give him some KoolAid and a 
and we'll have the booze!!!!
As for bed <> does he think you live in a banana split????
This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Posted May 12, 2006
I'll let him know! He's 11 now.
Awe Bed.. you're so sweet
This is my son's poem - it is being published
fundamentallyflawed Posted May 12, 2006
Congrats to him! It's very nice indeed. Cheered me up!
This is my son's poem - it is being published
aka Bel - A87832164 Posted May 12, 2006
It's beautiful poem, no wonder you're proud 
This is my son's poem - it is being published
bawimeko Posted May 12, 2006
Very good! Makes me think of the beautiful music of Virginia Astley! The boy has talent!
This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Posted May 12, 2006
He does, I'm very impressed... I honestly have no clue where he got the talent from though... I'm as creative as a rock and his father is worse.
On his behalf...
This is my son's poem - it is being published
zendevil Posted May 12, 2006
Very nice!
"As creative as a rock"
Well, don't forget rocks become diamonds sometimes, i reckon that's pretty damn creative!
zdt
This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Posted May 12, 2006
This is my son's poem - it is being published
owlatronas Posted May 12, 2006
its good hun no need to blush
This is my son's poem - it is being published
teri_whoo_77 *Goddess of Whoo* American Ambassador to the Council of Thing (Slightly Odd, Mostly Mellow, Rather Risque) Posted May 12, 2006
That was a maternal pride .
This is my son's poem - it is being published
owlatronas Posted May 12, 2006
ill hopefully be like you when little ones come along
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