h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi KB,

I'm your sub editor for Bog Butter. The new one is here A87797849 don't forget to subscribe

Having given it a read through, I currently have no questions, but I may do later. For now, I'm going to go link hunting.

Mags

Cheers, Mags, I'll sub to it now.

I've added a couple (well, three to be precise) links to the entry.

We don't have a general one on cheese and nothing I can find in Ceaser either

Have a read through, check I've not changed anything you don't like etc.

Mags

I've looked with very peeled eyes, but can find nothing else to add to this, KB.

if you're happy, so am I and we cn get this sent for it's final spit and polish.

Mags

I just noticed a couple of tiny things. Rather than saying Lent is "a fast time", maybe "a time of fasting" would read better. It makes it clearer that I didn't mean it's very speedy!

Also, could I change "...used in Lent" to "...used during Lent"?

Other than that, I'm happy with it. Thanks for subbing!

Changes made

I can't wait to see this with a photo on the Front Page...

Mags