h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi,

Thanks for reviewing my Mozambique story. What did you mean by 'personally not too keen on abridging words except in dialogue' ?
Abridging would be cropping ?

Hi there

I'm hoping some of my 'friends' read your story, but they tire of me, I think; but they usually obey. This was supposedly the reason why I became the first Star Profile on GW Newsletter!

I probably should have used contracting/abbreviating ('don't' have your gift).

Do hope others will read and enjoy your tale.

Birbeck

Hi there

Read the two reviews, so far. I think they enjoyed it, but we all agree you use too many adjectives and so on.

Another 'friend' said they'll be reviewing it.

Keep going. Birbeck

I write, I learn - thanks