h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi Deeety! Your piece on Baby's Milk was selected from the Alternative Writing Workshop to be part of the <./>UnderGuide</.>. I think you're probably already familiar with the process, but I can answer any questions you might have.

I'm broelan, your Gem Polisher, and I've just finished going over your piece. I've made a copy of it for the UnderGuide, and made some grammatical and punctuation corrections to it. Now it's your turn to check out what I've done with it and see if you're happy.

If everything looks shipshape just let me know and I'll ship it back off to the Eds. If there's anything at all that needs to be changed, say the word and I'll fix it up in a jiffy.

The UnderGuide version is here: A21536660

Hi broelan,

Looks good to me....

Thanks! I'll tell the eds to run with it, then.