h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi Menza,

first of all, thanks for the kind edit you did on my entry... nevertheless, there are two (very) small points with it:

Third paragraph, second sentence: 'Although there is no hard evidence why it's getting shipped to Australia and back other than for marketing purposes.' -- Shouldn't the word 'Although' at the beginning be removed or replaced with 'nevertheless' or such? This way, it doesn't make much sense to me, but I'm no native English speaking person.

Second footnote: 'information from ... (blah blah)' -- Please capitalise.

Sorry for the nitpicking...

Hi

I've had another read through and I think the "Although there is no hard evidence......" does make sence, it just doesn't flow as well as the rest of the paragraph. Perhaps a "However there is no hard evidence......" would fit a little better, Sound good?

As for the footnote, that one is all my fault. Editing far too late at night. I'll send a note to TPTB when you get back to me about the other line.

And I like nitpicking, its one of my bestest hobbies.

Fine, 'However' is OK with me. Have a some sleep...

I love empty weekends.