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Could you read my article on dyslexia just to see if it makes sense before I post it off to the editors?

http://www.h2g2.com/A452206

Cheers,
Yeliab

You didn't need to ask me to read it through - thats what the Peer Review does, you silly boy

But I have, because i'm nice () and here are a few comments.

You are using the words "I" and "myself" too much. You have to write as if it was an entry in an encyclopaedia (as it is, really) and therefore you can't write it in first person.

Also, instead of saying "you" say "the sufferer".

Under symptoms (I can't spell that either ) you've repeated yourself a little bit.

Otherwise, it's really good. Lots of external links too, that's great.

Oh thank you, I'll change that. However on eof the key reasons that it is written my someone who knows waht it is like, so it's more personal and can be related to.

I'll put some more bits in another article and link them accross so that the main article can go for subbmition.

Cheers,
N

Sorry - it's gotta be in third person. It's the rules. http://www.h2g2.com/writing-guidelines

You do know that the Peer Review is for doing what I've done, isn't it? http://www.h2g2.com/peerreview

glad to help though

Actuallt I didn't know that, but thanks.

I found a good 3rd person article on dyslexia as well so I think Mine will complemet that quite well. I probably won't submit it.

Nick, I don't know if you have realised, there is no longer a "Submit" process. It's the Peer Review now.

Yeah, I know see and understand. TQ muchly.

Great.
Glad to help.

Wow, you were up early! Or was that you went to bed late?!

Me??????? Up EARLY?!?!?
I was up late, of course!!!!!

Well that's allright then.

Not out of the ordinary either.