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A girl, ...

Post 41

Anonymouse

And a sheet from her bed


A girl, ...

Post 42

Ossario T'an

Draped 'cross the pulpit instead


A girl, ...

Post 43

timZwan

she did what?


A girl, ...

Post 44

Ossario T'an

Well, lets collate the lines of this limerick so far: -

A checkered flag flew from the spire
Constructed from girls' night attire
A sheet from her bed
Draped 'cross the pulpit instead...


o.k. the girl didn't do anything in the 4th line : "draped" = how the sheet from her bed was found lying on the pulpit in the church under the spire mentioned in the 1st line above. 'cross = across -abbreviated.

The restrictions placed by the structure of limericks means that so much of the story has to be condensed, yet still convey the intended meaning. Thus is the challenge of limerick writing.

Sorry if this blows it for others here reading.

Was that what you wanted to know Element?


A girl, ...

Post 45

timZwan

I think that about covers it, thanks smiley - smiley


A girl, ...

Post 46

Ossario T'an

Do you have a suitably witty and punchy 5th and final line to profer for this limerick? And may we see it if you do? smiley - smiley


A girl, ...

Post 47

timZwan

Well here goes.....

A checkered flag flew from the spire
Constructed from girls' night attire
A sheet from her bed
Draped 'cross the pulpit instead
And vicar blushed in front of the choir


A girl, ...

Post 48

Ossario T'an

Well Done!!! smiley - smiley

I had this in mind: "Was what made the vicar retire!" -but it was not my turn. The game permits the supplier of the last line to rule off and start another limerick... ...but only if they wish. This thread IS getting a bit long to scroll down. You could fire up another page if you want and start there.


A girl, ...

Post 49

timZwan

Thanks, smiley - bigeyes

I'll scratch my head
and come up with something new instead
and start a new thread as soon as I can


I'll let you know when


A girl, ...

Post 50

Anonymouse

Thankfully with the new structure the threads can go on for quite a long while and not crash most browsers. smiley - winkeye

'Nonniesmiley - rose

(When is when?)


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