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Subbing the Moon trilogy

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Hiya BB, here we are again! The subbing version is A87919122 - don't forget to subscribe!smiley - biro

I have not read the Moon Trilogy, so you'll have to bear with me if I ask a lot of questions!

>>As the Moon trilogy begins, Earth's 50-year world war (1914-1947) has ended with the complete victory of Britain and America. <<

Are those dates correct? As I make that only 33 years... smiley - erm

GB
smiley - galaxysmiley - pumpkin


Subbing the Moon trilogy

Post 2

Bluebottle

I've subscribed! Feel free to ask away, and I hope you'll forgive the odd spelling error and typo, such as when I wrote '1947' and meant '1967'…

<BB<


Subbing the Moon trilogy

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

>>Despite their legends of the surface, most believe that the universe, except for Va-nah, is solid rock.<<


Va-nah is their name for the moon, isn't that also solid rock?smiley - erm


Subbing the Moon trilogy

Post 4

Bluebottle

The inhabitants of the smiley - moon live on the inside and can see the other side above their heads, while below their feet is solid rock. So their view of the smiley - galaxy universe is that it is all solid rock except for where they live, which is the inside of a bubble of air in the middle of the universal solid rock. So from their point of view, Va-nah is the name of the bubble of atmosphere in which they live in the middle of eternal rock.

<BB<


Subbing the Moon trilogy

Post 5

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ok

>>Humans and U-Ga can reproduce.<<

Do you mean "Humans and U-Ga can interbreed"?


Subbing the Moon trilogy

Post 6

Bluebottle

Ahem, yes, smiley - blush is it just me or is it getting hot in here....?

<BB<


Subbing the Moon trilogy

Post 7

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - laugh


Subbing the Moon trilogy

Post 8

Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Hi smiley - hug
Happy new year! smiley - ok

>>Instead launches straight the story with only a brief explanation of the setting to inform the readers that in 2408 the Kalkars had been pushed to America's west coast the other side of the mountains by Julian 18th.<<

Do you mean:

Instead it launches straight into the story, with only a brief explanation of the setting to inform the readers that in 2408 the Kalkars had been pushed to America's west coast (the other side of the mountains) by Julian 18th.

Or something else?


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