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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Hiya BB smiley - smiley

I am subbing your article here: A87914767 please remember to subscribesmiley - towel

I'll return with any queries/questions.

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Post 2

Bluebottle

smiley - ta Have you read much by Burroughs?smiley - mars

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

All of the Martian books, and the Venus and Jupiter ones which I sought out afterwards. I was 18/19 and hungry for more sci-fi.


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Bluebottle

I really did enjoy his books about smiley - mars, and talking of which have you seen this?
http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-44952710

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Yes, I happened to have the news on when it was breakingsmiley - wow
I emailed the contact at my local astronomy club so he could email the rest of the members (we're not allowed to do that now) smiley - sadface and that's the first alert actioned by me since all the changes took placesmiley - biggrin

I stayed up long enough to see Mars last night, it's like a sparkling ruby in the southeastern sky. The moon was pretty too, almost orangey as it was so low. There's a lunar eclipse tomorrow - we'll catch the tail-end of it - and Mars is at opposition smiley - mars


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Bluebottle

Sasha's raised a question in the Peer Review conversation, which could be answered with a footnote (smiley - footprintssmiley - musicalnote):

Amicus Productions was a British film company in the 1960s and 1970s and Hammer's (A710227) closest rival. Best known for horror films, particularly portmanteau stories, it also made comedies and science fiction, including two 'Dr Who and the Daleks' adaptations starring Peter Cushing (A710245) under their family film division AARU Productions.

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

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>>First published in six fortnightly issues of Argosy in January and February 1937, Burroughs was paid $1,000 for the 80,000-word story.<<

I don't think there could have been six fortnights in January and February, do you mean six weeks?


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Post 8

Bluebottle

smiley - dohYes, you're right - six weeks. 9, 16, 23, 30 January & 6, 13 February.

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ta

And I'm done subbing, if you'd like to approve it I can return it to us Eds. smiley - run


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Bluebottle

Looks good to me except the smiley - modlost at sea smiley - huh

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

Oh yes! smiley - headhurts

I meant to ask you about that but forgot. I use the mod smiley to flag something up and remove it when it's been resolved. So:

>>Outwardly identical to us, they have developed a homing instinct like a pigeon which allows them to navigate in a world without stars or a rising and setting sun, although this only works on dry land and they are lost at sea.

should that be *and when they are lost at sea.* otherwise it sounds like they're all lost at sea all of the timesmiley - erm


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Post 12

Bluebottle

smiley - eurekaThat's what I suspected, but I didn't think you'd asked me. Maybe change it to:
'although this only works on dry land. The instant that they are on water they completely loose all sense of direction.'

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Galaxy Babe - eclectic editor

smiley - ok

Changed that. Ready to return now?


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Post 14

Bluebottle

smiley - okPress the button!

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h2g2 Guide Editors

Congratulations! Your Entry is on the Front Page today smiley - magicsmiley - earth


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