h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hello! This time, 'Event Horizon', the polished version of which is here:

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I've tinkered with the punctuation in places but I won't bother you with every single change. Apart from that, no major changes or even suggestions. This, perhaps:

>>Jack left the wheel to help Elsi but too late, with its bow held under by breaking waves, a big one smashed her coaming and finished her off<<

I've altered 'its bow' to 'the Tango's bow' to make it a bit clearer.

Otherwise, a pleasure, as always... I think the central section of this is especially good, as writing ('crab-clean' is very good).

Gotcha Trin - sounds good - thanks so much & cheers - langsandy

Hello, langsandy - just calling round with the UG version of 'On the Rocks'; hope the formatting suits

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Hi TNT - looks good to me - what's happening to it?
cheers - langsandy