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A87887939 The Stewarts. Charles Stewart At The Court Of Spain
I'll be subbing the above but haven't started yet. I'll be back with some questions soon - including would you consider thinking about a catchier title?

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A catchier title I shall think on that, bet you have an idea or 2

Charles at the courts of Spain and France. Enter Athos, Porthos and Aramis.

Or perhaps

Charles at the courts of Spain and France. Enter Athos, Porthos and Aramis, Lights camera Action.

Maybe Charles Courting at the Courts of Spain and France?
Did you want to include more information from here: A87842370
There's not much France in the entry to date.

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Sounds like a plan
However this chapter was intended to show how this adventure inspired the book "the three musketeers".

So if the entry is split and the remaining expanded to explain the historical inspiration of the book.

eg Charles Stuart his inspiration of Alexandre Dumas

Any ideas will be welcome

Forgot to ask what sections would you suggest to migrate

If you want this entry to show the inspiration for 'The Three Musketeers', you might want to mention 'The Three Musketeers' in it? I thought that the following entry in the series about France was intended to be about that?

Off topic a second I recently read 'Peveril of the Peak' by Sir Walter Scott, which of course is about George Villiers' son George Villiers.

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Time for a rethink.

The Stuart entries we have from you are:

A21605320 - The Life of Mary Stuart, Queen of Scots
A87874889 - James VI of Scotland inherits the English Throne
A87873457 - The Children of James I
A87856988 - George Villiers - Duke of Buckingham
- Charles Stuart at the Court of Spain

There is also material here:
A87842370 - The Charles I and Henrietta Maria of France NOT FOR REVIEW

Most of the Three Musketeers material is in the George Villiers entry, however there is no reason why we cannot bring some of it in summary into this entry, bearing in mind that this entry's focus is on Charles rather than Buckingham.
Also, what are your plans for the Charles & Henrietta Maria entry? Are you planning on putting it into Peer Review or did you want to incorporate the material into this entry?

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PR is the plan when happy BB

Would you like to have a read through and let me know if you are happy with the changes I have made, as well as the proposed title?

I've not made as many tweaks as I have with previous entries, so I'm looking forward to seeing the next one in Peer Review.

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Any comments? Changes you'd like me to make?

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Ref A87887939

Looks good thanks BB, that will leave the last part to finish have you any comments to add about that one.

Thanks for all the editing

Congratulations! Your Entry is on the Front Page today

thanks for the news

Well done >BB> excellent job good illustration