h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Bob,

Firstly, sorry for the delay. I received this entry - A74481807 - a while back, but the process of editing has been held up and complicated in more ways than I can muster the words to mention.

However, I have now - almost - finished the first draft edit. I have a few bits as yet untouched, but it isn't far off. For that reason, I'd like to include you now so that feedback can come while the hoods up, so to speak.

Please feedback whatever comments come to you - and we can enter a discussion on the way forward.



The Apprentice

Thank you for a super job Apprentice it looks good to me just 2 points please.


The Alexandrian Coast
Detachments of the Classis Alexandrina also completed patrol duty on the navigable stretches of the Nile.


The River Danube and Black Sea (para 3)
municipium The second-highest rank of Roman city, only colonia had a higher status.

thank you again excellent work

Oh and don't forget

The Roman Navy
The Fleets Of The Roman Navy | The Roman Fleet Types And Patrol Areas | Roman Navy Ranks
The Ships of the Roman Fleet | The Classis Britannica

the header links to the set please

that (post) looks impossible at this stage ...

I hope they can be linked later though

Thanks again for a fine job

That was the reason I removed the links at the top, because until the entire series has been subbed it will need to be modified in each entry every time I new one gets added. I'm glad the edit looks OK. I'll complete it this weekend and return it to the Editors next week.



The Apprentice

I have finished the bits I hadn't got around to and gone through the whole thing another time. I have incorporated your comments. If you have the chance to read through again, that would be great. Then I'll be (almost) ready to hand it back to the Editors!



The Apprentice

I cant see anything there to alter thank you as I said before excellent work thank you