h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Hi there

I'm here from the UnderGuide to let you know your piece One Note Song has been selected for inclusion in the UnderGuide and that I am polishing (editing) it for that purpose. You can find the piece here: A5109824

Feel free to let me know if you think it's okay, or you'd like to see some changes...

Frood (UG Editor)

Super. Making the first line bold is a nice touch. But why did you give the last line the same treatment? (Not that you shouldn't, but I don't understand what it brings to the piece, that's all)

~ db

Just as a nice round off to the first person sentence used to begin, and a first person sentence to end. If you prefer I can alter it to plain font, it's YOUR piece, you tell me what you want to see

Frood

eh. the way i see it is that the first sentence is summative, and hence making it bold makes sense. the last sentence, is, well, just a sentence. so i think it would be better off plain.

my undecided number of pfennigs

~ db

Sorted

hi db, don't know if you're still about, I'm your Gem Polisher for today and have polished up Missed Question for the UnderGuide here: A20286885

Hope you approve, I've taken out the split infinitive in the first line, and also linked the piece to One Note Song (where I've removed the offending split infinitive again).

Well Done on yet another piece of writing into the UG!

yeah, i'm still around. hibernating, buried deep, but alive. every so often i awake, and return to hootoo...

oh yes, i approve, thanks, it's an honour etc

[must be in a taciturn mood today]