h2g2 The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: Earth Edition

Whilst lurking came acrossed
played with it ,here it is

There is no more darkness here
From Where the light once slept,
But now the bright horseman rides
From the depths of deep dark eyes,
Where time burns its fiery love
Through every grain of space.

There Is nothing spared,as now there is there no place
Where the bright horseman halts, above
The seething chaos of the day? And why
Does fire ignite this waking sleep, inside
The frothing tumult of the heart? What keeps
This torrent burning, sweet and clear?

The empty horseman rests, as if abroken spell,
From Within the silent storm, a echoe of that silent,
Ringing bell

Hi, Logicus,

I'm confused. Is this just you re-working my poem? And if so, why?
It doesn't make any sense to me at all now.

Please explain.

Cheers,

Chaiwallah

It was me reworking your poem ,i came across it and liked it,
feeling board, i messed about with it ,no offence intended.
But the it was the imagery your poem ,just looking for inspiration.