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Subbing: John Muir

Post 1

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Hi Elentari,

I'm your Sub Editor for John Muir: Conservationist. The new one is here: A87828754 don't forget to subscribe smiley - ok

It's almost perfect smiley - biggrin

Just a couple of things:

>>he went to university at the University of Wisconsin<<
to
smiley - birohe went to the University of Wisconsin

>>He was therefore a major part in the<< creation of Yosemite

smiley - biroWould 'he became a major part' be better?

And I added a 'which' in here.

>>Muir's life is honoured in the John Muir Way *which* is a 134-mile long distance footpath in Scotland<<

That's all I could find but, I'll have another look (or several) over it again.

Mags


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Post 2

Magwitch - My name is Mags and I am funky.

Hi again,

I've made those changes listed above and as I find nothing else, nor any useful links, have returned it for the final polish.

Will look forward to seeing this one the Front Page.

Excellent work smiley - magic


Mags


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Post 3

Elentari

Thanks Mags, that's great!


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Post 4

h2g2 Guide Editors

Congratulations! John Muir is on the Front Page today smiley - magic


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