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Subbing Lentil and Bacon Soup

Post 1

The Apprentice

I have the pleasure of editing your entry - A81080877 - and have completed a first edit through. Please comment, at any time, if you have any issue with something I've done. I suspect, comments permitting, to have this delicious recipe back to the Editors quite quickly.

smiley - scientist

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Subbing Lentil and Bacon Soup

Post 2

The Apprentice

Just to clarify, while I'm waiting for any feedback, I'll be rifling through the 9,000 pages of Peer Review feedback. Who'd have thought Lentil & Bacon Soup could stir up such conversation...

smiley - biggrin

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Subbing Lentil and Bacon Soup

Post 3

Elentari

Thanks! Sorry it took so long to reply, I haven't been on hootoo much lately.

It looks good, my only comment is about your suggestions for replacements for the rosemary. I haven't tried any of those, have you? I expect they would work, but I'd be a little wary of suggesting them without trying it first.


Subbing Lentil and Bacon Soup

Post 4

Elentari

One more thought, if it's not too late: could you specify that smoky bacon is best, please?


Subbing Lentil and Bacon Soup

Post 5

The Apprentice

I passed the article back to the Editors last week.

Regarding the replacements for fresh Rosemary - no. I noted from PR that it was questioned what might replace them and I look it up in a cookery book and a couple of web sites. I could change 'try' to 'you might try' to make it a tad more open to the reader to experiment.

I'll communicate with the Editors about 'smoky' and suggest the chance to 'you might try'.

The Apprentice


Subbing Lentil and Bacon Soup

Post 6

The Apprentice

Tweaks made!

smiley - scientist

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