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Subediting Garden State
Icy North Started conversation Oct 30, 2007
Hi Elentari 
I've been busy mangling your fine entry on the movie Garden State, and what's left is here: A28303913
No major changes - I've rephrased a couple of sentences in places to help it flow, and I've removed a couple of links (Miramax, Fox, Time)which didn't really add anything - I've left the ones which linked to reviews of the movie.
Please let me know if it looks OK. If I don't hear from you, I'll probably return it to the Eds on Wednesday 31st - the curators will be happy to change anything after it hits the Front Page.
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Icy
Subediting Garden State
Elentari Posted Oct 30, 2007
, Icy. It looks good.
"he also sent them the song he had planned to play during certain scenes."
Should be songs, I think.
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