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subbing 'Warfare in Ancient Athens'
echomikeromeo Started conversation May 20, 2007
Hi Elentari
I've subbed your entry and it's at A22766420 - do check and make sure everything seems as it should!
subbing 'Warfare in Ancient Athens'
Elentari Posted May 21, 2007
Hi EMR!
Couple of things that I think were mine anyway:
"However, the cavalry had limited uses, as they only carried spears. They did not use stirrups, as they had not yet been invented, and so could be easily unhorsed."
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"However, the cavalry had limited uses, as they only carried spears. Stirrups had no yet been invented so they could be easily unhorsed."
"These men became very important politically due to the huge power the navy won for Athens, which was the main force for keeping the Delian League in line."
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"These men became very important politically due to the huge power the navy won for Athens, as the navy was the main force for keeping the Delian League in line."
subbing 'Warfare in Ancient Athens'
echomikeromeo Posted May 22, 2007
Fixed those thanks. How's it now?
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