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Subbing Evil Eye Lounge
Icy North Started conversation May 1, 2007
Hi Elentari,
I've been given your fascinating entry on Evil Eye to subedit, and after some judicious light pruning it now looks like this: A22084445
Let me know if you are happy with it!
Icy
Subbing Evil Eye Lounge
Elentari Posted May 1, 2007
It looks great, Icy, thanks.
I've thought of something I ought to add here:
"On the ground floor, next to the entrance, is a small shop selling all kinds of alcohol. Behind this is the main bar area,..."
should probably be
"On the ground floor, next to the entrance, is a small shop selling all kinds of alcohol. Entry is through the shop during the day and through a small alley on the left during the evening. Behind the shop is the main bar area,..."
Subbing Evil Eye Lounge
Icy North Posted May 2, 2007
Thanks Elentari 
I've added that sentence.
Right, into Room 101 it goes...
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